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Re: YWS - One Page
Good idea Nate! But don't you think the home page will get a bit... er... packed XD Maybe you could limit it to fewer clicks like maybe one or two... ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: World Of Sin
This kinda seems as if you did this with it... Its not really poetic and it is all chopped up... I like the idea maybe it could be some sort ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: What We Are (title change?)
I like this. Its very interesting it makes me think of a lot of things. (thats a good thing :wink:) I think you should add more texture to it. Right ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: The Nameless Novel: Vote for a beginning!
I think I like the first one. It seems like it would have some drama and maybe once you develop the character enough we would be worried for her and ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Shiver down my Spine
Hello, I agree with Via, kinda like lyrics. I have one suggestion though: Only some for who you truly care As soon as they come, they vanish into air Maybe ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Our Last Kiss
I take in your scent and how your arms feel This bit sounds kinda out... It rhymes with the next line but it just seems to go on a little ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Another portrait! Go on, give it a look...free gloves!
Its very nicely done. Your hand looks a bit weird. Like a claw almost. You look happy in this picture :D Nice work!
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Self Portrait, please look! :D, i'll give you......socks..
OMG! Your so pretty! That drawing is really good. Its a bit dark but thats the style right XD I like your expression. PRETTY!
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Portrait photography
Oh purty. I like the first one. Its almost mysterious... I like the angles and the faces you used. Keep going :D
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: un named
Hey Morgan this is Vivi. Well personally this is kinda bland. Absolutely no description and we don't feel for the character. You have to capitalize your "I"s. It need a ...
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Muse! Your gorgeous! *dies* OMG! What?! No one told me you where extremely pretty! I love your hair! *tries to steal hair*
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Aw your so pretty Dream!
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
I see a doggy! Cute! *squeals*
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Want To Change Your Username?
What? I am mixed up...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for having an awesome avatar!
Jan 30, 2008
