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Gwenevire

  • Randomosity Re: YWS - One Page

    Good idea Nate! But don't you think the home page will get a bit... er... packed XD Maybe you could limit it to fewer clicks like maybe one or two... ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: World Of Sin

    This kinda seems as if you did this with it... Its not really poetic and it is all chopped up... I like the idea maybe it could be some sort ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What We Are (title change?)

    I like this. Its very interesting it makes me think of a lot of things. (thats a good thing :wink:) I think you should add more texture to it. Right ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: The Nameless Novel: Vote for a beginning!

    I think I like the first one. It seems like it would have some drama and maybe once you develop the character enough we would be worried for her and ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shiver down my Spine

    Hello, I agree with Via, kinda like lyrics. I have one suggestion though: Only some for who you truly care As soon as they come, they vanish into air Maybe ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Our Last Kiss

    I take in your scent and how your arms feel This bit sounds kinda out... It rhymes with the next line but it just seems to go on a little ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Another portrait! Go on, give it a look...free gloves!

    Its very nicely done. Your hand looks a bit weird. Like a claw almost. You look happy in this picture :D Nice work!

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Self Portrait, please look! :D, i'll give you......socks..

    OMG! Your so pretty! That drawing is really good. Its a bit dark but thats the style right XD I like your expression. PRETTY!

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Portrait photography

    Oh purty. I like the first one. Its almost mysterious... I like the angles and the faces you used. Keep going :D

    Feb 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: un named

    Hey Morgan this is Vivi. Well personally this is kinda bland. Absolutely no description and we don't feel for the character. You have to capitalize your "I"s. It need a ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Muse! Your gorgeous! *dies* OMG! What?! No one told me you where extremely pretty! I love your hair! *tries to steal hair*

    Jan 31, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Aw your so pretty Dream!

    Jan 31, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    I see a doggy! Cute! *squeals*

    Jan 31, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Want To Change Your Username?

    What? I am mixed up...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the member above you known for?

    Known for having an awesome avatar!

    Jan 30, 2008


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain