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Re: Milkman!
Hey Aed. “Milkman!” He turned round, to see a tall figure, wearing a dark red T-shirt running towards him, carrying a rolled up newspaper. Milkman flinched a little before responding. ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: I Will Critique!
No probs it will be up in a minute.
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: I Will Critique!
Sure thing :)
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: I Will Critique!
Hey, I know this is random but its in the randomness section and its my job. I am purple so I will review anything you would like, just post it ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Blood heart.
Hey, Meg! Isabelle woke up What does she look like? What does she do? What is she thinking? with her arms realized and her mouth to be opened. #1. Released ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Blood heart.
Hey, Meg! a hissing voice came from behind the paper bark maple I like this, paper bark... Its so southing. "Speak to me, tell me what I’ve done wrong, tell ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed:Chapter Four
Let It Bleed Chapter Four Foos Small birds chirped, the southing noise of waves, and the cool spray of the ocean pelted the rocks eager to get a taste of ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three
Thanks ning, I know... Its really full of errors but I don't care right now. :P Hard to explain. I know Fayth was right but he was very rude and ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love #1
I've always wanted to try and write a love story from a girl's perspective. Let me tell you: it's been amazingly hard. I've tried to incorportate as much girly stuff ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three
I guess you are right, but he was a bit rude at the end :( I asked that people help me pull out important things, that make the story unique ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Change Your Username!
[deleted] Next time, read the rules - Nate
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Change Your Username!
I have a question, if you changed it twice today (by an accident) can you change it again the next few days? Or do you have to wait until the ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three
Okay Fayth. I find you reviews very harsh and rude. My character is not a jerk off. Maybe Gwen thinks she is in a dream. People aren't completely oblivious to ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three
Hey, thank you for all your crits. You probably don't know that I am just doing a sketch of the story, just getting the feel of things, the ideas what's ...
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Two
Let It Bleed Chapter Two The Other End I hurt all over, every time I swallowed it felt like someone had stuffed a handful of sand down my throat. The ...
Feb 10, 2008
