Gwenevire

Erm 5/10 it freaks me out...

It sucks...:lol: I just read it over again and it totally sucks! XD

Thanks! And the girl dies not the wolf! XD What do you mean by the Ellipses? I am sort of confused! (Typical me I am just dumb!)

Thanks a million! :D I don't know what I would do without you! :P

Thanks! :D

Wow...Thank you! You have just made that clear to me and now I get it! Thanks...I will do some work on it soon. But not know because I am moving ...

*Clap* Very nice! I really like it! *clap* One thing you say " Lip glossed lips " Lips...You should say something els for the second lips :P I really enjoyed ...

Wow! Please separate your story! Its really hard to read!

I took small cautious heart thudded like an approaching storm. A solum howl echoed through the trees. I recoiled in fear, but did not stop. I pressed forwards picking up ...

What? :D I am completely lost...what are you watching?

My heart breaks My eyes sting as salty teardrops roll down my face Its clear form twists towards my nose As I am lying right next to my rose My ...

Oh! Thanks :D

The sky darkens as rain filled clouds slowly drift over the blazing moon. Lightning strikes and lights up the forest sending shivers of fear down your spine. A fain howl ...

Wow that's intense...But sort of hard to follow along with.

Wow... Good work! I think you need to say foals less though... :D