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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Influenza

    I couldn’t catch any "the"s (which is bloody amazing!) but I did catch this: Tormuk took Nerissa's shoulders in his hands and looked her IN straight IN her eyes. One ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: You

    "the way you move the way you touch the way you kiss me oh so much the way you whisper in my ear the way I scream but you can't ...

    May 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Red Door (Seasame Sleep)

    Red Door It was something my therapist said to me once: Go to your Happy Place. “Close your eyes, Camilla. Imagine a sea, mountains, fields, whatever your heart desires. Sit ...

    May 4, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge