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Re: hitman
Hey, I liked the allusions to hide and seek and some parts made me chuckle such as: He picks up the bourbon bottle and downs the last of it, “right, ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Hey, can you review this for me por favor :) General Short Story E for Everyone Be as harsh as you want, I can take it *braces self. Appreciated Lewis
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: °•.♥.•° ☆♥★ I'd Love to Review You! ★♥☆ °•.♥.•°
Hey, Was wondering if you could review my short story in return for points, a high five and some good karma :smt002 . Title - Around The Fur Genre - ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Photography
Hey, Photography's not really my thing so this feedback may be pretty useless but I really liked the last 2 pictures, particularly the edited version. Reminds me the film noir ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Hey everyone
Yo I'm also a newbie too :) Seems I'm having similar problems to you in throwing away half of what I write, how experienced are you at writing? 5-6 fantasy ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Coming out of the closet
Hey thanks for the welcome KD :) Unfortunately I can't draw and would be willing to exchange a toe for such a gift if anyone's offering. No particularly favourite genre ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Untitled- just a short, sarcastic poem I wrote!
Firstly, Lol. Secondly, short, but in my opinion all the better for it, makes the satire 'sharper' for lack of a better term. Not much I can say other than ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Death Note
Howdy there, First review so bare with me. Ok, so honestly I quite enjoyed it, although unfortunately short you seem to have established some character with the speakers 'need-to-be-known voice' ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Coming out of the closet
Hey all, Was recommended that I should introduce myself and after weeks of lurking have finally decided to do so. So err, yo. A bit about me: 17, almost 18, ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Around The Fur (Formerly A Chance Encounter) EDITED
Hey all, Edited and hopefully improved. Lemme know what you think :) P.S - The new title is taken from the Deftones album of the same name. Around The Fur ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Journey of a dead man
My first attempt at trying to write something 'original'. Plan on writing a short story everyday for the next 2 months in an attempt to improve my writing so criticism ...
Jun 15, 2010
