GummyWorm

Like confetti said, this is really adorable, but bittersweet (in a good way). I love your use of dramatic irony throughout the story in how the little girl doesn't understand ...

Wow, I have to say, this piece really hit me. Your writing really did justice to the surrealism of the dream and it reminded me a of a fairy tale ...

Hi Redrum! I'm a big fan of the Warriors series and, like VuzzyCat said, I think you did a good job with the characterization. The piece sounded very true to ...