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Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
There were a couple of errors like grammatical. You're going to have to proofread but i see potential without the errors. Just always proofread. Thanks!
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. I'm serious. Worst thing I've ever read. I got it for Christmas. Are you kidding? The Other Boleyn Girl was truly good. I ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Grudges
Misfortunes is spelled wrong. Sorry if it sounds repetitive. But it's pretty good. The way you explain what grudges really are will really speak to people.
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Dead Memories
I really like this poem. Actually the title made me come to read it. There's always a title that makes me come to do. In the future, I hope to ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Eternal Secrets Prologue
Oh my gosh...this is kind of overwhelming but thanks for what you guys have said about it. It's kinda of rusty because I haven't written anything in like a year ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Eternal Secrets Prologue
Prologue: Eternal Wounds It was the day and it was dreadful day. Anna opened her eyes and felt the warm sun on her face. It seemed like the sun was ...
Sep 5, 2009