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Re: Doubt
Amazing! Let me tell you, one thing I love to read, is a sad story. I do all of the time. However, of all things in which I've read, this ...
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Re: haiku
Peaceful! This poem brings to the reader, peace in words. If there is a way to explain what peace is, this must be it. It is delicate-sounding. Even just the ...
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Re: The Ledgend of Brightskies; Book One: Alaska
Thanks! While reading your review on this chapter, I was able to go through the story in which I have saved to my computer, and change a few things. This ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
Breathtaking! This story has tons of feeling. I love how you spoke about the way the main character's eyes dialated at certain times. They way they shifted. The appearance of ...
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Re: I had you, now I don't
Great! Reading through this, I only see a few errors. If one weren't paying attention to the grammar, spelling, punctuaction, ect, they most likely wouldn't notice most of them. This ...
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Re: In need of writing ideas and help
Thank you! That sounds great! I'll be looking around for a mentor. I just want to see who's out there and I'll get back to you. Hopefully you understand. Best ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: In need of writing ideas and help
Acctually, I did already ask for a mentor on "The buddy system" recently today. Since you seem to know quite a bit about this club, would you mind telling me ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: The Ledgend of Brightskies; Book One: Alaska
A white wolf with blue eyes like ice, stalked, stomach close to the ground in the shadows of the night. The air was as cold as her stare as she ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: In need of writing ideas and help
To all expirienced writers, My name is Katie Buttaro. I have been writing since I could spell, and I am currently 12 years old. I don't know if any of ...
Aug 31, 2011
