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Re: Shadows
I admit this a good piece of writing. I admit, it would fit more as a prologue rather than a chapter and there are a few typos within the story ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Ocean's Call
Dear Author Two words: LOVE IT! It shows so much expression of the sea and the cloaks paragraph was very meaningful and nice to read. Thank you very much for ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Ocean's Call
Dear Author Two words: LOVE IT! It shows so much expression of the sea and the cloaks paragraph was very meaningful and nice to read. Thank you very much for ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Secrets of Asyra [Chapter One]
Dear Author The story here is extremely interesting, gives a good imagery of the world in which the protagonist sees. However, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: The Spirit of Community
Dear Author Reading this poem was quite refreshing and lovely to read, considering the unfortunate events in England. You made me see the spirit of unity and compassion within those ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Graces Chapter One
Wow! I really like it! I hope you can countinue on writing. He seems like a good-developed character!
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Order of the Talisman Book 1: Prologue
Is é an t-am le haghaidh gnímh ag teacht.... Ever wondered if there were worlds beyond your world? If there were places, people beyond earthly knowledge? If there was more ...
Sep 19, 2011
