GryphonFledgling

Baaaack! aged shingles hanging to the roof by half a nail While I totally get what you're going for here, this just sounds funny to me. I mean, how does ...

Hello, hello! GryphonFledgling here to review! A formatting note really quick: Whenever a new character begins a new line of dialogue, they need to get bumped down into their own ...

Hello there! I've actually been meaning to review this forever, but time has never been on my side. But that is all about to change! They said it had been ...

Hello, hello, hello... Oooh, the idea behind this is just so sick and twisted. It's brilliant. The childhood trauma, the future consequences, all of it. Very nice. The execution of ...

Hello again! Okay, so I haven't read the previous version of the chapter, so everything is fresh to me. Everywhere was completely white, except for the stiff, beige cast that ...

Oh, this was lovely. Seriously, the description was just gorgeous. It just had this wonderful poetic quality to it that made me keep reading even when nothing was happening. This ...

Fffffffffffff... New Sachi-scribblings? Sign me up. I loved this. The setting, the fact that the world extended beyond Karina's apartment, Vance's new ability to not be a complete snarky, secretive ...

Heya hey! I'mma here to review your story here! First off, a quick note about your author's notes: don't worry. We at YWS totally got this reviewing thing. We know ...

I know that I must sound like some crazy person, but I have watched too many horror movies not to be precautious. Kaylee seems really lucid to be drunk. She ...

Heya hey! GryphonFledgling here to review! but anyone in my position would trade a hundred beautiful girls for a turkey breast. It might just be my dirty mind, but I ...

Hey-oh! Welcome to YWS! I'm Gryph and I'll be your reviewer today! This hooked me. Really quickly. I lovedlovedloved your first few lines. Way to smash a cliche to bits. ...

Hey-oh! The professor dodged the airplane and snatched it out of the air before it could pierce the space station’s walls. I totally am seeing this prof as Doc Brown ...

Hey-oh! First off, and it's relatively minor and nitpicky, but still incredibly important, paragraph spacing! Oh geez, paragraph spacing. YWS occasionally ignores formatting and clumps everything toge

Hey-oh! Back for the next chapter! This chapter was much stronger than the last chapter. It still kind of chugged along and I was wanting it to slow down so ...

I had fun. But... like, a sentence before, he was saying that Monopoly is the most boring game ever. What changed his mind? A little more explanation would be nice. ...