GryphonFledgling

Tua had learned not to wrinkle his nose at the ambassadors when he was six. There was a scar over his left eye, usually hidden by his hair, which would ...

Oooh, very very nice. The little letters indicating what was accepted in the contest did confuse me at first though. I figured it out, but still... potential for confusion?

Updating the post I've already liked means I can't "like" it again. Curse it all.

This makes me so incredibly happy, despite the lack of free money. WFP sort of wormed its way into my writing life and constant recent downtime was making me a ...

I find the lack of Pat disturbing. I'd have to say any book is a good book. I prefer hardcopies of books. They have the pretty covers and the wonderful ...

Everyone else blamed me for Danielle’s suicide. Wait, I thought Danielle was murdered. Strangled. Was there contrary evidence? Was it made to look like she committed suicide? I was a ...

Ooh, I liked this. The voice was especially what hooked me. So snarky, so matter-of-fact, even when dealing with something like her death. It was quirky and fun and I ...

Life-Captain James Marque resisted the urge to press his fingers to the bridge of his nose. This was just getting aggravating. It was his job. He had signed up for ...

*snugmahugs the alot* Seriously, one of the best things evar to come of misuse of a language.

Yes. Yesyesyesyes. So much better. I loved the continuation of the musings on his late master and their exploits together, and the cultural stuff on the Thitherians was awesome. Here's ...

Hey-oh! At this point he discarded his son's body How? Just dumped him on the floor? Why was he carrying it around just to throw it aside? This seemed a ...

The one person who felt familiar to me was out of my reach, and I didn't even know why. Erm, what about Dean? Isn't he familiar and there for Duncan? ...

Hoookay, this is my favorite chapter by far. So much conversation and character development! *boogies* If you ask me, love is more important than both. My idea of paradise is ...

Oooh, dealing with the spirit for the cure was interesting. My question is, now that they have faced the spirit, who the tribal folks really seem to revere if not ...

Mmm, dramatic. Spacing was a little wonky here again. Wanna check on it? I had fallen for Nico. Why? She talks about knowing him for the past few days and ...