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GryphonFledgling

  • Information Desk Re: How to Modify Your Blog

    Mmm, a quick question: Is there anyway to export your YWS blog to your computer? Like, if the internet were to one day die in the nuclear fires of cyberwar, ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    It's about a broke ghost who tries to balance finding out why the spirits of people are suddenly leaving their bodies while they're still alive with not being evicted. I. ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Stop using Internet Explorer 8!

    Chrome.

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Quantum Chronometric Tunneling and Purple Socks

    Hey-oh! The professor dodged the airplane and snatched it out of the air before it could pierce the space station’s walls. I totally am seeing this prof as Doc Brown ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 1 - 3

    Hey-oh! First off, and it's relatively minor and nitpicky, but still incredibly important, paragraph spacing! Oh geez, paragraph spacing. YWS occasionally ignores formatting and clumps everything toge

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: June 2011 Review Day Shout Out Thread

    Holla back. Didn't know if I was actually going to be able to participate today, but the fates smiled on me. I'll at least get a few in.

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Terrace Chapter Two: The Ascent

    Hey-oh! Back for the next chapter! This chapter was much stronger than the last chapter. It still kind of chugged along and I was wanting it to slow down so ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Terrace Chapter One: The Awakening

    I had fun. But... like, a sentence before, he was saying that Monopoly is the most boring game ever. What changed his mind? A little more explanation would be nice. ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Cat Steps draft (25/6/11)

    Had it just been my sister leaving, I could have rationalized that she was the only one in the family going to the palace. Maybe I'm just being incredibly slow ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (14)

    Wow. All that stuff we're finding out about Lars is pretty heavy. I really wouldn't have suspected any of this really from Solea's diary. Speaking of which, I feel almost ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Name of God

    Erm... I'm with Twit. This is beautiful. It really is. The language drew me in, I was hooked on this premise, but I didn't really understand it. It might just ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (5)

    Hin had never owned a new set of clothes in his life. They itched. Not a dirty-itch or a too-tight-itch, but a new-clothes-itch. At least, that's what he thought it ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: VII--0.5

    Well, it took far too long, but here I am! Am I allowed to get a little nitpicky? I'mma be a little nitpicky, or else this review will be nothing ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (13)

    Mmm, I liked seeing the White Swans in action here. I get a very distinct sense of them thinking they are all that is holy and good, but when you ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (12)

    Whew. Reviewing finally. So... a lot was explained here. And a lot more questions raised. Like, a lot. But I'm willing to roll with them for now and see what ...

    Jun 15, 2011


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree