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  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when, as you clean your room, you discover more pens than you thought you owned. You know you're a writer when you hoard even pens ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Santa Claus is Coming to YWS!

    I demand to know who sent me presents! And thank you. :D

    May 25, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Present Past

    This was lovely. It was so flighty and confused and melancholic. I'm not sure if I could completely follow along with everything, but it was definitely emotive. I just felt ...

    May 19, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Interactive Stories

    Zomigosh, sounds so cool! *totters off to play with it*

    May 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Too Soon - Chapter 1

    Hello! A few nitpicks: Each family will only be allotted two gallons of water and four food units per day Two gallons of water a day seems really low. A ...

    May 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Six Feet Under The Stars

    I started to try to read this. I really did. The title was what hooked me. I wanted to see what all it was about. But the blocks! The ginormous ...

    May 17, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Handwriting: Cursive or Unjoined?

    My mom insisted that I write in cursive all through elementary and middle school, insisting that it would be super-important in high school. Oh, the lies one is forced to ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Re: The Old Woman and the Werewolf (2 of 2)

    *whoot* Part two! Still liked this, but having come to the end, it seems like it's more of a scene of a greater story, or just a meeting, a moment ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Old Woman and the Werewolf (1 of 2)

    Heya! I liked this. The genre-savvy grandma alone made this a great read. Other werewolves would know what had transpired, and they would hunt him down for his transgression. I'm ...

    May 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Gingerbread [Edited]

    *blink* Interesting re-imagining. You managed to make an already-dark story even darker. Spiffy. I was a little confused as to what time period you were shooting for. At first, it ...

    May 11, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Frog Legs

    Awwww. Seriously, that was what I was thinking the whole way through. "D'awwww, so cute!" The voice for the whole piece was so fussy, so grown-up, so perfect for an ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches

    D'awww. So sweet. Won't nitpick, just point out my quick general impressions. I liked the relationships between the characters and the making-up scene was really sweet. However, it felt a ...

    May 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Carved into Skin

    O_O Dark. Like, really dark. I was flinching reading it. Good job? (I guess?) That said, the story did a lot of telling and not much showing. "Tell, not show" ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Dangerous Game of Truth or Dare

    'Allo! What have we here? No title? *eyes bleed* Anything is better than "Title needed" or "Untitled". Anything . Try "Truth or Dare" as a placeholder. Anything. Any story deserves ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Updates to the Like Button

    *like* I do agree with lava: can we make the "Like on YWS" any bigger? For a minute, I couldn't even find it. But yay! This is so awesome!

    Apr 27, 2010


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