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Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when, as you clean your room, you discover more pens than you thought you owned. You know you're a writer when you hoard even pens ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Santa Claus is Coming to YWS!
I demand to know who sent me presents! And thank you. :D
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Present Past
This was lovely. It was so flighty and confused and melancholic. I'm not sure if I could completely follow along with everything, but it was definitely emotive. I just felt ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Interactive Stories
Zomigosh, sounds so cool! *totters off to play with it*
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Too Soon - Chapter 1
Hello! A few nitpicks: Each family will only be allotted two gallons of water and four food units per day Two gallons of water a day seems really low. A ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Six Feet Under The Stars
I started to try to read this. I really did. The title was what hooked me. I wanted to see what all it was about. But the blocks! The ginormous ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Handwriting: Cursive or Unjoined?
My mom insisted that I write in cursive all through elementary and middle school, insisting that it would be super-important in high school. Oh, the lies one is forced to ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Re: The Old Woman and the Werewolf (2 of 2)
*whoot* Part two! Still liked this, but having come to the end, it seems like it's more of a scene of a greater story, or just a meeting, a moment ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: The Old Woman and the Werewolf (1 of 2)
Heya! I liked this. The genre-savvy grandma alone made this a great read. Other werewolves would know what had transpired, and they would hunt him down for his transgression. I'm ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Gingerbread [Edited]
*blink* Interesting re-imagining. You managed to make an already-dark story even darker. Spiffy. I was a little confused as to what time period you were shooting for. At first, it ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Frog Legs
Awwww. Seriously, that was what I was thinking the whole way through. "D'awwww, so cute!" The voice for the whole piece was so fussy, so grown-up, so perfect for an ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches
D'awww. So sweet. Won't nitpick, just point out my quick general impressions. I liked the relationships between the characters and the making-up scene was really sweet. However, it felt a ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Carved into Skin
O_O Dark. Like, really dark. I was flinching reading it. Good job? (I guess?) That said, the story did a lot of telling and not much showing. "Tell, not show" ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: A Dangerous Game of Truth or Dare
'Allo! What have we here? No title? *eyes bleed* Anything is better than "Title needed" or "Untitled". Anything . Try "Truth or Dare" as a placeholder. Anything. Any story deserves ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Updates to the Like Button
*like* I do agree with lava: can we make the "Like on YWS" any bigger? For a minute, I couldn't even find it. But yay! This is so awesome!
Apr 27, 2010
