GryphonFledgling

Two, officially. I hit my swing earlier Saturday afternoon (not in the time period alloted *shakes fist*) and then had to crash because I had to go to work crazy ...

Oh and I think chapter 1 may be a bit too long but seriously none of this will have worked in chapter 2 Why not exactly? Could you possible split ...

So... She ended up in the library without knowing how she got in the library? And she doesn't feel freaked out about this? I liked the character, I was just ...

Gryphon (griffin, griffon, however you wish to spell it)! XD I love his head. I've always had a devil of a time with birds' heads for some reason and seeing ...

This is Watson meditating on Holmes, isn't it? In any case, this is fantastic. The little moments of revelation and thought and action all broken up the way they are ...

Gryphons have always been my one of my favorite mythological creatures (and "gryphon" is my favorite spelling). My second attempt to write a novel involved a pair of gryphons: a ...

I would say superhero stories are their own genre. It's obvious in comic books, just hasn't really breached the gap into written fiction officially. And if you're looking for what ...

Hey-oh! This was lovely. I clicked on the picture before I read the piece and it works so wonderfully. Nice interpretation of the prompt. Some nitpicks: He was wearing a ...

Review ahoy! Okie dokie, first off: title! Please, please, please give your work a title. It doesn't have to be a great title, but anything is better than "Untitled" or ...

I love this list, having known about it for a few years. Granted, some of the questions are to poke fun, but some of them are legitimate. And even the ...

"Ten..." I wanted to be a starpilot when I was a little kid. I'd also wanted to be a firefighter, a policeman, and an "asthrofizziseth". **Whir** The engines' roar is ...

Hey hi! Steampunk! *froths at the mouth* I lurves me some steam, punk. Anyhoo, actual reviewing... The beginning bit of narration was interesting. Really made it sound like a journal ...

Hello there! I come bearing reviews! a happy expression on his face This... bugged me. It's just so non-specific. What does this happy expression look like? Does Death have any ...

D'aw. This was short and sweet. Not a lot of character development, not a lot of story and angst, but great just the way it was. I actually liked the ...

Hey hi! There was some interesting character interaction here, but I'm not sure if what I got from it is exactly what you are going for. Forever seems actually really ...