GryphonFledgling

*boogies* And now you have to stop. Right now. Either that or move to Mars. Any more awesome and the world's awesome meter would break. It can't handle the combined ...

First of all, *like*. Ahem, now that's out of the way and I can move on to reviewing... It's probably really telling about my fanbase tendancies where when I read ...

Ooh, Beauty and the Beast retelling! Yayz! First off: You've got chapters here, why not try out the spiffy novel feature? 'Tis cool stuff and it keeps you from having ...

Overall, I felt like I didn't get to know Jonas. Can we get some more information on him? Like, maybe have some characters talk about him to give us something ...

And I had thought the rumors about Snoink's uprising had been exaggerated...

I like this plan. The redundancy of both pages and groups had already struck me and I like the page format much more.

Hey hi! This was interesting. You started after the break up and so the characters already have a lot of history. I wanna see how this is going to go ...

Oooh, nice. It's amazing how much the drop of names can add so much meaning to a piece. If you had put in any other names in there, names that ...

I could have written this. I don't write in any consistent way and I can never stick to plans. My biggest tip is just to keep writing. Sure, it might ...

Hey-oh! Ooh, a hero who shoplifts. Interesting. I wanna see how this all goes down. A few questions that popped up: Does he have a computer to deal with this ...

Hey-oh! I must say, your title really drew me in. I wanna know how the whole story comes down to that! Very nice hook. I agree a bit with kakagirl ...

Same thing as Rosey. She beat me to reporting it.

*likedy like like* I kinda agree with Snoink that the killing comes the heck out of nowhere really suddenly. A month after what? The broken wrist? You stop at just ...

Hey-oh! I had a dream about whales last night. A sign? Also, if you look at the word "whale" long enough, it begins to look misspelled. 'Tis strange. All righty, ...

*like* *like* *like* *a million times like* A few tiny-small nitpicks: word colonel is I'd suggest putting "colonel" in quotes, since the speaker is talking about the word as a ...