GryphonFledgling

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I've successfully completed NaNo four years running now and yeah, I'm gonna just echo everyone else above me. Don't worry about the fact that you just wrote basically the same ...

Really, the best way you can get to know your characters is to write them. Seriously, I don't usually write notes about my characters at all. I just write them ...

Mary nodded, not blinking away tears; Sara couldn't see it anyway. This line. This line cut me to the quick. I was reading through, forming my critique of the overly ...

Hey you! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this. It's been on my "to do" list for forever, it seems. So here I go! Gonna ...

Hey-hi! Gryph here for reviewing! The atmosphere created was really, really nice. Not a whole lot happened in this story, but the weight of the story was still felt. I ...

Hello hello hello... made c rinkles appear under his eyes. This chapter felt like it flowed a lot better. I wasn't being zoomed from one spot of information to the ...

Hello! I'm back for another chapter! Drinmeeca could feel his sadness and concern for her, but she did not want anything to do with this man. Why not? He's a ...

Baaaack! aged shingles hanging to the roof by half a nail While I totally get what you're going for here, this just sounds funny to me. I mean, how does ...

Hello, hello! GryphonFledgling here to review! A formatting note really quick: Whenever a new character begins a new line of dialogue, they need to get bumped down into their own ...

Hello there! I've actually been meaning to review this forever, but time has never been on my side. But that is all about to change! They said it had been ...

Hello, hello, hello... Oooh, the idea behind this is just so sick and twisted. It's brilliant. The childhood trauma, the future consequences, all of it. Very nice. The execution of ...

Hello again! Okay, so I haven't read the previous version of the chapter, so everything is fresh to me. Everywhere was completely white, except for the stiff, beige cast that ...

Oh, this was lovely. Seriously, the description was just gorgeous. It just had this wonderful poetic quality to it that made me keep reading even when nothing was happening. This ...

Fffffffffffff... New Sachi-scribblings? Sign me up. I loved this. The setting, the fact that the world extended beyond Karina's apartment, Vance's new ability to not be a complete snarky, secretive ...