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Re: When Bunnies Attack
(aside from a new project...ish...buuut that's for Part 3 to cover. xD >> *sweatdrops* I didn't say anything! ^^; ) Say whaaa? *excited bouncing* He nods obediently—gracing me with the ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: McDonald's
Hey oh! I come bringing a review! Children shove small tennis shoes in yellow cubbies against the wall, shriek with laughter as their stockinged feet chase each other across the ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Disenchanting
I love your character's attitude. Sassy, but not too much so that it becomes annoying. A very nice balance. I liked the way you sort of eased into it all. ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Will you be mine?
Hey there! This is a nice little vignette, but I kind of wish it had a little bit more. As is, it kind of comes across a little... whiny? I ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Topic Descriptions & Content Ratings
Yes, yes, and yes to all of the above! I missed topic descriptions so much and the rating makes me happy!
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: abiotic
and there, by the road, is the sign that tells exactly how far away humanity is Favorite excerpt, right there. I'm not much of a poetry writer, so this is ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
First, you should totally read Inkheart . Great, great stuff. Second, I kinda like this idea. Very Farenheit 51 . Third, I like the voice of the character, especially in ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Paper or PC?
I go through phases. Right now, I'm in a paper phase, where I absolutely have to have everything and anything scrawled out in my horrible handwriting. I have to physically ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Quit Work. Become a Trapeze Artist.
Ooh, gracias. *headdesk* Stupid typos. *fixed* because she was hyper-competant and knew how to make a killer PowerPoint presentation Yeah, it is a woman. Thank so much for the review!
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Quit Work. Become a Trapeze Artist.
Dedicated to Sachiko . --- The sticky note had been taped to the edge of Melody’s computer screen because the sticky had faded from the back. The edges were beginning ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: An Authorial Adventure
The *like* button does little to express the sheer amount of squee this piece brought me. But I click it anyway. This sounds like the inside of my brain. For ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Just Sarah:Chapter 1
Hey oh! Review time! I liked the character's voice in this. She had a bit of spark, a bit of humor, even as she was dealing with horrible circumstances. It's ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: The Mary Sue Litmus Test is Killing Our Characters
I like this. A lot. I agree with you nearly all the way. I do seem to remember there being a disclaimer somewhere on the page about the test not ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Halloween Special Radio Show on October 31st
Drat. Trick or treating. I'll say hello to the archives for you!
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Untitled: Part One Edited!!!
It felt as though daggers where cutting deep into his side as he attempted to breath deeply. He lay on the ground, breathing painfully while he stared at the blue ...
Oct 30, 2010
