GryphonFledgling

Hey-oh! Stopping by to re-review, as requested! Okay, the beginning here is like a billion times better than the first time. You get right into the action, introducing us to ...

Well howdy, I'm back! Again, still in love with this. The writing is very nice and your main character surprisingly sympathetic for an assassin (even in the last chapter, I ...

Hello there! I liked this. It was crisp and moody and full of action. I'm definitely intrigued and want to read more about this character and how she's going to ...

Hey hi! A few little things real quick, then my overall impressions: Last time it had been Lee KiBum. A bit nitpicky, but perhaps have something like "Last time, he ...

Hey hi! Is this the first piece to the story? Or is it some excerpt from the middle? I'm assuming it's the beginning, seeing as how we're sort of told ...

Just because the fantasy genre has endless possibilities doesn't mean that you have to explore all of them. Sure, you could have swords and sorcerers and flying carpets and all ...

A story is a fanfic if it is written in another story's universe or involving another story's characters. For instance, if you were to write a story about Ralphie and ...

Hey hi! This actually reminds me a lot of Shiver by Maggie Steifvater. It's not exactly the same, but the premise is similar enough and the book popular enough that ...

Mmm, this was interesting. I liked the sort of buisness-like, detached nonsense directions the conversation was taking in the midst of the actions. However, it did seem a bit odd. ...

Ha, probably should have read the prologue before the first chapter, but I missed it somehow. But hey, I'm here now, right? Same note here that I had with your ...

Mmm, I like this. Between the attitude, the two sets of twins, the bickering... I like it. It has a nice punch to it. Color me intrigued. One thing that ...

Gryphon, Stella, Kitty ->> Honestly, does it really matter? Give it a rest. *tucks matter into bed* ;)

1 - Beginning (part 1 of 2) Hin Langoleer had not been born a lucky child. o-o-o He had thought the hut was abandoned. The thatch was overgrown with moss ...

I use them quite frequently / a lot. ... isn't / a forward slash? And \ a backslash? Has this whole issue arisen from my lack of knowledge of punctuation ...

Number of Backslashes: 4957 Who uses these? Seriously? I totally did.