GryphonFledgling

I slowly pulled myself to my feet, ignoring the pain that shot through my leg. Nitpicky, but since we're in her first-person narration and she mentions the pain in her ...

Heya hi! Just as a general impression review, I couldn't help but wonder why this guy is in this particular line of work. He obviously doesn't want to kill anyone ...

Mmm, still intrigued. This has a lot of the same atmosphere as the last chapter and again the character interaction was wonderful. With more prose around the dialogue, they were ...

Hello hi! I liked this. A few folks have said it was confusing and I agree with them to a point, but I really did like it. What mostly confused ...

Mmmm, color me intrigued. Very interesting. The idea (not to mention the title) caught my eye and I am interested in seeing how this situation came to be. Where are ...

Hello! Back for the second chapter! This was really long and it felt really, really long because of the paragraph breaks. I can see where they are and it looks ...

Oh. My. Goodness. Seriously, you had me rolling at "made rockily so by its rocky composition". Certainly answered the classic question of just how Joseph of Arimathea did manage to ...

Hey hi! Mmm, this looks interesting. It seems like there is a lot of worldbuilding and thought going into the world behind all of this. The idea looks interesting and ...

Hey hi! First off, I kind of like this idea. It's not often that we get to see adults acting like this in stories, certainly not from their viewpoint, and ...

Congratulations, everyone! I read so much fabulous poetry this month! I was so scared that my down-to-the-wire uploads for my last two poems would disqualify me, but yay!

Hey-oh! Continuing on from the last chapter! Same thing here as with the last chapter: when your character is thinking something that is specifically thought, go ahead and italicize it. ...

Hello! This is a prequel novel to the Final Fantasy series? Like, the game series? If so, seems like it should be in FanFiction novels. But I'm intrigued to see ...

Zomigosh, so many characters! For realzies, there were so many characters with odd names introduced so quickly, I wasn't sure what to make of this whole thing. They all knew ...

Hello hey! All those stories about vampires and werewolves being natural enemies are just some sad excuse for not having a good plot or conflict for their stories. The truth ...

1 - Beginning (part 2 of 2) She wasn't what he had been expecting. The long man, Tua had hauled Hin along like a puppy, spidery, callused fingers at the ...