GryphonFledgling

Really pretty. I'm not a poetry critic, so I can't help you in that way, but I can say that I liked this. It scars my ear drums That is ...

This so true. I loved it. I'm no good at math and I love the power of words. I'm not a poetry critic, but I think that the poem was ...

Yes, I agree with Silly Sydestix up there. That was most definitely my favorite part. I'm not much of a poetry critic, so I couldn't tell you with an informed ...

I'm in the same boat as Sabrina up there. I'm not a poetry critic, but I thought this was pretty. The rhythm was great. The eagle's feather was an unexpected ...

Wow, I really liked this. I dabble in poetry at the most, so I can't critique, but I figure praise is good too. This was just so vivid. I could ...

This was really good. I'm not much of a poetry writer myself, so I can't really critique, but I do like the use of periods rather than commas. Each is ...

Since I'm not quite sure that everyone who is reading this is quite understanding what I am trying to do with my Mutts project, I will explain it right now. ...

Hehe. Be Bop is the kind of person I would hang out with because I felt sorry for him. You seem to have confusion about the difference between 'your' and ...

Jeez, I didn't realize that there were so many rules for poetry. I thought it was a free form of expression, with less rules than other forms of writing. To ...

I really wasn't sure what genre (I write poetry only rarely and don't really know much about genres in poetry) to put it in, so I put it here. Can ...

The sun shone down, upon the silent street. Delete the comma between 'down' and upon'. Fluffy white clouds, hung in the clear blue sky. The tall lush green trees, swayed ...

There are days that I wonder why I do this – sit on my bed or at my desk or at the table at lunch and scribble words on lined ...

A while ago (I need to start again myself) I kept a file on my computer where, every day, I would date an entry and ramble on about my writing. ...

I understand the idea of rambling therapy... For a while (I need to start again) I had a file on my computer where everyday I typed up ideas for my ...

This was interesting. The whole time I was trying to figure out what was going on. Was it a dream? April Fool's Day? I couldn't figure it out. Great ending. ...