GryphonFledgling

The funny thing about my reading this poem is that I like the night. I like the mystery of it. Sir Wozzel I think did a masterful job of critiquing ...

Hehe, this was great. It's been a long time since I've seen a limerick. I guess they don't pop up much in my daily life. My only problem with it ...

"Removed the barrier between us. That’s what I have done." He asked her what she did and she answered him in her head. In her head, she had taken away ...

I cried in this book. I literally broke down crying. I did have a bad day that day, but I am generally not prone to great emotional outbursts in a ...

'plauge' = 'plague' 'peak' = 'peek' (in this instance) (Is this part 2? I can't tell. Numbers might be nice... :)) These are really short entries. Did you ever consider ...

His music is calling me, inviting me closer, as it did those many years ago. He cannot see me as I hide, across the street from him, lost in the ...

I weave characters by day Spin plot lines at night I form a web of deceit, masked in letters Ink is my thread Paper is my foundation I ensnare readers ...

This was beautiful. But did you consider adding in some more mundane descriptions. Describe the way how the sand grains that the wind blows down sparkle like tiny diamonds and ...

The present tense in this story is cool. You don't see many works like this because the present tense is sometimes distracting, but this is pretty good. my heart pounding ...

Everyone else has spoken their piece on critique, so I won't repeat what they are saying. I'll just go with the warm, fuzzy feeling that praise brings. I'll admit that ...

You're probably going to hear this a lot, but I really liked this. I'm not a poetry critic, so I can't really give you 'feedback.' but I can just say ...

Wow, I loved this. It just flowed like a song. I was thinking it to music when I read it, it just sounded so right. It's a great love poem ...

I disagree a bit with Cade with her comment about the poem revolving around the rhyme scheme. Think about haiku and sonnets. They are hugely dependent on their schemes. I ...

I liked it. It was short and abstract, but it had great imagery and leaves a lot to be interpreted. It makes the reader have to imagine things. Not many ...

Is this a metaphor for Christianity? It may not be, but the way that 'Savior' was capitalized, that was the way I took it. Either way, it was a beautiful ...