GryphonFledgling

Wow, this was beautiful. It flowed like a poem. Lovely. My one question is how a sound can crash across the sky. It is a great image, but I don't ...

11/30/07 036 – Smell The smell of sweat was salty and bit at the back of his throat. He could taste the fear of the guard on his tongue. It ...

I loved this book. You should read the sequel "The Siren's Song" or something like that. I seriously cannot remember at the moment. I didn't like it quite as much ...

Omigosh! This was so powerful. I loved the entire thing and have nothing to say by way of critique. Seriously, this was so beautiful. My favorite image was "a scarred ...

I liked them. I didn't really understand the first stanza of your poem, however. Wouldn't you want to talk more, so that you would make more? And how does it ...

I write as many drafts as are needed. I am currently on my second of my novel, and I am sure that there are going to be more than that. ...

*chokes on laughter at the writer's block strip* That is so hysterical. I totally want one of those. *scurries off to find cardboard box and magic markers* You gotta love ...

I have two: 1) Don't worry: "The first draft is always s***" (have read this written by many published authors and boy is it true...) 2) NEVER EVER throw out ...

I have had to cut out many characters in my short writing career. I recently cut out something like four characters out of my book and actually it was a ...

Go for it. I agree not to overuse it, and never use it on some formal paper for English, but in a work of fiction, many rules were made to ...

No, I don't think that it is a problem at all. Sometimes one needs a break from a particular work but they don't want to completely give up writing for ...

Following up with starrynight, NEVER EVER throw out what you have written. I don't care how bad it is, you may one day need it! Trust me. I have thrown ...

As far as I know, the general word count that designates a novel is from 50,000 (shorter) to 150,000 (longer). I suppose there are exceptions, but those are the generals.

6/10 I didn't get much of the actual story. What exactly happens in the story? It sounds like it could be really good, but I don't know. I can't really ...

Well, aithalos said pretty much what I wanted to say, so i am left behind there, but I do have a couple more. First of all, it just seems rather ...