GryphonFledgling

Hehe... I like the little ruff that goes down the side of his head. It looks like sideburns. Overall, he looks like a little bald schoolmaster or something. I dunno... ...

The first one is my favorite. I just like the way the stairs and ice draw you in, like a portal. My only complaint is that I am not sure ...

Wow. This was really gripping. Circuses freak me out, and you captured - for me - the creepiness of the circus... Hehe. Your descriptions were wonderful. You have made a ...

He sat in one of the seats in the far back, his gaze fixed upon the other passengers. This is a little wordy. Consider - "He sat in a far ...

Well, with the first kiss, he could have been trying to be normal. He could have realized that he was being attracted to boys, but was confused why and so ...

6/10 I like the cell shading

*light show and balloons* Way to go, Via!

12/17/07 005 – Outside It was strange having so much space. It even frightened him a little. All his life he had been fenced in; walled up; tied down. His ...

I liked these. They sound like my own haiku drivel... My personal favorite was the first, though the two "Haiku Blues" ones are a close second. "I Heart Haiku" Short. ...

This was interesting. My only thing is how the mood of the poem changes so fast. It goes from a bit of peer bullying in school - nothing too bad ...

Wow, I like it. The edit is much faster and more streamlined, and so more powerful. The message almost got lost in the original because of the amount of words. ...

Hehe, I like your signature. I dunno about your plan to do just part 1... I was reading the original before I was called away and so I didn't get ...

I like the simplicity. You have some great language, but I liked how you keep it all within one house. I'm not sure what you meant by the giant ballroom ...

Wow. This was just fabulous. I loved your use of different forms of punctuation, spacing, and style in there (parenthesis, dashes, italics) - they just add so much to the ...

I was getting a childhood crush that a guy had on a girl that he has known since he was little. They were best friends, and he knows everything about ...