GryphonFledgling

Yes. In a comparison between your original and the new edited version, you did a great job in adding a more dramatic end. I liked the poem. The way that ...

I didn't realize how long it was until I was about halfway through it. Then I looked at the scrollbar and was like "HOLY COW!" But it is all good. ...

I see that you did continue it... This was interesting. I think that I might like Sandra better from the viewpoint of an outside character like Johnny. Or maybe it's ...

Well, JabberHut beat me here, so I won't bother repeating what I was going to say... Though I want to... Grr... Nah, this was great. At the risk of being ...

Hehe... Ah, the joys of editing. I admire you for sticking it through so many washing cycles. It is an example to us all. However, I agree, you should probably ...

Oh dear... Disillusionment. It had better get better for her fast or I'm going to be one unsatisfied customer. Wow. I really liked this. However, this seems to be moving ...

... and then chocolate to bring you back up again... *showers Snoink with chocolate* Don't you worry. Your day is coming... ~GryphonFledgling

8/10 I likies it but it is so small and a little grainy! :(

Well, since I'm here... *ahem* And my hair isn't green, it's just a bad webcam :lol: . Oh and also, how old do you think I look? Without peeking at ...

Everybody looks so good! Who knew that writers were so attractive? ;)

I daydream all the time in the bus, and a lot of them could make fun stories. Yes, as do I, but my main trouble is finding the time to ...

12/17/07 003 – End Stanton sighed as he unfolded his morning paper. Someone had brought him an English muffin – heavily buttered, just the way he liked it – and ...

For my novel-in-progress, I have saved every chapters as a separate file on the computer. It makes it easier to find exactly what I am looking for and to save ...

All three. Actually, I attempt to keep my writing confined to notebooks, but they always inevitably get lost or whatever, so now it is mostly on looseleaf on a clipboard ...

Welcome YWS! Be careful or you'll soon become a junkie. Poetry, eh? I must say that prose is my preferred method of writing, but I dabble occasionally here and there ...