GryphonFledgling

I'm afraid I can't help you with the mechanics of the poem... Poetry not being my strong point and all... However, I really did like reading it. I was a ...

Hmmm... I was a bit confused. The beginning starts out with Naomi being confused as to where she is and Kyle being all apologetic about it being a mistake. Then ...

I agree that it does do a bit of telling rather than showing. Perhaps, if you were to take one more line after each of the images you present and ...

I liked it. It sounds like me and poetry. Not exactly my preferred style of writing... But you did a fantastic job here. You had a great rhythm going and ...

A quite original poem. I loved the rhythm and the language. *snork* Great job here. Inspiration comes in the most unlikely places, no? *applause* ~GryphonFledgling

Whoa, what? There are sequels? *feels totally out of the loop* I must look those up...

Just as a note to new readers: You do not have to read these stories in order. They are all related in theme, but they are all about different characters. ...

Whoa... William's story was so pitiful and sad... My heart just went out to the poor guy. It was kind of shocking too. Nice effect there with the last line. ...

This was kind of short, but it had so much potential. Couldn't' you make it a little longer? Tell us what these sentiments are that the author is bringing to ...

"It was a dark and stormy night." Think Snoopy? You thought wrong. This familiar first line begins one of the most cherished books from my childhood. Today, as a writer, ...

I'm not really into necromancy as a subject, but I will say that I loved these books. It's been a long while since I read them, so I don't remember ...

Geez, these books are most certainly in my top five. Nathaniel was such a complex character. I loved him one minute, hated his guts the next. Bartimaeus was such an ...

I don't know why I love these books, but I do... I just hope that the movie doesn't butcher it. I agree that the books are a little long-winded and ...

I love these books, though technically most people would say I am too old for them... In fact, I just reread them last night... I must say that the first ...

I loved this book. It was so short and sweet and yet so complex that I wanted to cry sometimes. I agree that this was a huge insight to autism. ...