GryphonFledgling

6/10 It's hard to read... So even if you do get the reference, you can't really enjoy it as much.

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I have written from both and haven't had any difficulties, but then, I don't write from a romantic standpoint. I think that if I were to try and write a ...

Yes, I would say that 'said' is past tense. Hey, no problem... Tenses are nitpicky.

"Trickster's Choice" was actually my introduction to Tamora Pierce. I loved them, despite having to figure out the history. I also do like the Lioness books, but I haven't read ...

I remember these books. I read them when I was a bit younger, but after I couldn't find one of the books in the series for over a year, I ...

Hi Randi! What genre/s do you write in? Who's your favorite author? Welcome here to YWS! I would read the Guides and FAQ, since they contain a great deal of ...

Hehe... Sounds like my experience ice skating last year. I fell quite a lot that night. I was better by the end, but certainly was suffering from a bruised pride. ...

Yes, I must second KJ in that this title has already been used (it is a fabulous book though, I hugely recommend it). I would change it, just for the ...

You jump right into the action here. Perhaps it would be best to take it a bit slower and start the day normally, but the character feels strange, like her ...

I'm a bit confused: how would putting fairy babies into human cribs keep them alive and unknown? It seems to me that if humans were that ignorant, putting a fairy ...

This was quite sad. However, I really didn't feel that the character was eight years old. The vocabulary for one thing, (inscription/description) seemed a little old for a child that ...

Hehe... Nail clippers. I swear, one of man's best inventions ever. But yes, they are sadly under appreciated and abused. Nice job drawing attention to them. I liked the poem. ...

1. I'm pretty sure that the part where Javier took the girl was a bit choppy. Any suggestions on how to fix that? Other people have beaten me to this ...

I second the suggestion to separate it out into different paragraphs. As is, it is rather hard to read. This was kind of short, yet powerful. I especially liked the ...