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Re: Just A Man Prologue
Yeah it didn't exactly pull me in. There is an obvious lack of description and the start is a bit off because it sounds like you're talking about writing a ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Just A Man Prologue
Everyone has a story. Some are long, while others are short. Sometimes the words get jumbled, mismatched, and ruined, thus creating utter confusion in the main character. But after awhile, ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Nostalgia (Syfy's Alice Songfic)
Dude I absoutly love it...and I guess no one OWNS Andrew Lee...well maybe Hannah...I wish I owned him! Lol. I'd tell him Wolverine would totally win against Spiderman (Primeval thing) ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Axel and Roxas...When They First Met (Part 2)
Aw, I find this cute. I always loved Roxas's and Axel's scenes when they're all acting friendly and whatnot! I think you should continue and add more details because I ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Axel and Roxas...When They First Met
This is interesting. I liked it, I was never able to write Kingdom Hearts fanfictions, actually my only talent in fanfictions at all is Alice in Wonderland, but anyway I ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Elliot (Chapter 1)
This is very interesting, I usually am not very interested in stuff about magic and all, but this...I don't know. It drew me in. I saw a couple of mistakes, ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Hey...
How sad, being a grin with no cat! But it does make sense, given your love of Alice and Wonderland. :) And... Johnny Depp is awesome. No bashing from me. ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Hey...
Hey there, Grin. (Just to let you know, we love nicknames). Welcome to YWS!! Yeah, no lies, Johnny Depp rules. I know lots of quiet people who are absolutely hilarious ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Hey...
Chello! I'm new here, I came from another writing site and I hope this is just as helpful! My stories shall be posted soon, please note that not all these ...
Sep 6, 2010
