Gringoamericano

This was a bit of a surprisingly good read. The frantic pacing kind of puts the reader into the mindset of somebody who has just been caught up in the ...

First of all: You left the filename within the first line of the story. Now for the actual review: I think that this reads more like the introduction to a ...

This was certainly an entertaining read. I like the fact that you took the time to establish who your character was, rather than just shoving the reader into a random ...

Well, the chapter wasn't very long, so there wasn't much for me to review, but I'm hooked, at least until the next chapter is posted. I definitely liked the concept ...

......There's not really much to critique if there is not really much of a story, now is there? You tend to skip over all of the apostrophes in the word ...

Well, this certainly has my attention. While dropping the reader straight into the action is almost never a bad idea (especially in a short story), you provide no explanation for ...

This story was a bit hard to follow. Your protagonist states that she is 16 (well, around that age, at least) but also attends university. And says that they have ...

This was a pretty interesting wee-er...read. It doesn't exactly seem like a negative portrayal of cannabis smoking, nor does it seem like a positive one. The dialogue seemed realistic, and ...