GrimRipper

well, its quite good, having a good description of the character's feelings. There was just one part that I didn't understand, but maybe its just my bad English, it was ...

Amazing as the one before him. The story is getting clearer, I guess by the ending that she has an ability that she doesn't like. which gives a whole new ...

This is just amazing, the depth of the character and the truth that hides in it. How cruel people can be to the weaker, it is probably what will happen ...

thanks for the reviews. I'll try to do better with the next chapters. about the confusion with the situation, well, the story is based on the situation in Israel, where ...

the story is good, very good as a story, but not exactly fast pace action, more like a thriller. but we'll, maybe it will turn to an action story. Anyhow, ...

Chapter two- Pride Morning came, and with it, school. So, I left home for a half-a-mile walk till school with a super-heavy bag on my shoulder. This is a half ...

This is simply amazing, so deep yet not too hard to understand. Things like this makes me start thinking for myself. Thank you for such an awesome poem!!!

Overall, liked it very much, especially the short conversation with his mom, it was the thing that touched me in this story. What I didn't like is that the guy ...

Hazel, although they sometimes change to green

I'm happily revealing the first part of my first novel: Shade- The First Immortal. This is the first thing I write since a script I did in 5th grade so ...

Liked it very much. the cold environment and it's description sort of preparing the reader to the Her thoughts scattered as the sound of heavy footsteps close behind her. Terrified, ...

Really liked it, especially the description of the environment and how it connects so well with the place. I feel so bad with myself for reading the spoiler because now ...

My story falls under the genre of fantasy, and it's going to show the dark side of god(not in the religious way) as a warrior. I'm not really struggling with ...

Hi, my name is Stiv, I'm a new writer and I'm correctly struggling to write my first creation. I live in Israel, and from the situation here I actually got ...