Griffinkeeper

Very classy Adam.

WOOT! The hull has been completed! Behold it's majesty! Front view: Rear View: Side View: Top View: WOOT WOOT WOOT!

More pictures! This time the WIP3 Series. Front: Side: Top:

Why don't you just post it here on YWS? Or contact reviewers who you respect?

Second WIP Picture. I think it's turning more into the Pillar of Autumn from Halo. SPEW Commandos and Halo. Hmm...

This is a picture of the WIP SPEW Gryphon. Construction is under way at secret space docks, but will soon be completed.

Oh my god! It's YWS-1 and YWS-2!

TJL, please ask a mod if you're unsure where to put a thread. I'm moving this to fiction discussion. *Moved*

HELP! I'M BEING KIDNAPPED BY THE SPEW COMMANDO'S!! NOOOO!!! *gagged* Grif.

Yak makes me think of the animal, not really a good thing. The Greatest Treasure

Natasha A mongolian monkey tamer. Very hairy, short, and smells like monkey poo.

The freckles seem off. Freckles are all usually found all over the place, not just in a narrow band between the eyes and the mouth. Does it really make sense ...

The pictures are nice, but they aren't particularly artistic. It looks and sounds like this is just a log of activities. It doesn't really capture any particular emotion or quality ...

I can't really critique it since it's not finished yet.

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