Griffinkeeper

Ha, if someone were to try and take away my books, I would just retaliate by stealing from their books or by spending a lot of time at the library ...

This story lacks structure. Here is a helpful way to organize your story. Once you have more experience, you can experiment with it. So, whenever you start writing, this is ...

1405 Hours April 9th, 2008 Merlin System The SPEW Commandos sat in the transport. "Has everyone seen the data?" Areida asked. "No, but there was this really terrible story from ...

1400 Hours April 9th, 2008 SPEW Gryphon II Merlin System The SPEW Gryphon arrived at the scene of the battle. Scrap metal cluttered the entire area around the two wrecks. ...

I think the main question was whether or not God has been replaced by Medicine, on the basis that many of the miracles performed are now being performed more frequently ...

But if you're after Bin Laden, or Al QAeda, why go into the country for war? And if that country is protecting the people you're after, why kill some of ...

Some sentences that bothered me: The poor lighting gave the vehicle a gloomy feeling, one that Leo didn’t necessarily agree with. He was alive, and the soldiers had said they’d ...

I just couldn't slug it out. In the beginning, with all the parental nagging, you focused on the nagging. Why? Usually when movies or books have nagging, they use the ...

Silly kids. Hush. Sometimes, I wish all younger teens were as smart as Sam. *sigh* In any case, I have to say I'm quite shocked at the anti-Obama, pessimistic attitude. ...

A bit of commentary... a couple of weeks ago, a very good French friend of mine told me he didn't believe Obama would be elected because America was so racist. ...

I read the first chapter of twilight online, absolutely hated it. Harry Potter is much easier to get into.

Only third?

Granted, but in order for this to happen we'll have to exterminate all life. I wish for a selective photographic memory.

Oh my god! Griffiny Awesomeness! *Stars* The first paragraph was awesome. Just plain awesome. Then there were the other characters. They spent way too much time talking, then you went ...

Dialogue goes on way too much. See writing link for more information. I think that just about covers it...