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Re: YWS Bill of Rights
We the people of the Young Writer’s Society in order to create a safe internet environment free from discrimination, unfairness, dishonesty, and spam; to encourage young writers to be creative, ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: For Snoink
Didn't realize Snoink was a book. A reminder that poetry fandom is fine, but comments should also have some sort of critiquing done in them.
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
Show time! **** When people want to hire mercenaries, they have many places to choose from and depending on where they look determines the number and quality of the mercenaries. ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
I'll be writing the first post later today. Last call for profiles!
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: Snoink & Griff
Nice!
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
Is this based on anything I should be aware of? (is it a book, a short story...) Knowledge is power right? I am interested. I will give my character some ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
Name: Specter Grey Age: 32. Gender: Male Occupation: Mercenary Leader Species: Human. Appearance: At this time, he is simply dressed. He has no armor and his only weapon is a ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
Following the death of Emperor Joseph the VI, the Sunoli Empire degenerated into anarchy. Centuries of feuds, contained by the Emperors, now spilled out as people battled to lay claim ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Jupiter Kilo Delta
Jupiter Kilo Delta, respond immediately, or Recovery One will institute containment procedure blue. Repeat, Respond immediately or containment procedure blue will be authorized. Alpha Ceti Delta out.
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Pursuing the Princess
When Rune opened his eyes, the first thing he saw was his younger sister, Vesper. She was bending over him, her brown eyes wide. Glancing around blearily, he noticed his ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Hello from newcomer Belle!
Welcome! I've briefed her on the 2:1 critique to submission ratio.
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: I really suck...
You know it's a bad thing when "Over 9000!" describes the number of posts you missed. *dies*
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Through the Kerr Hole
The question: is it worth revisiting? Overview: A man falsely accused of murder is given a choice: die in prison or travel through the dangerous Kerr Hole (Which is really ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Like a Child
I read the poem. Here is my critique. "From the lips of children and infants you have ordained praise because of your enemies, to silence the foe and the avenger." ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: An Invitation to a Party
I'm thinking of rewriting this piece. I like the dialogue well enough, but the action doesn't really do anything but occupy space.
Jan 10, 2009
