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Re: Bunch of Haikus
I think #2 and #7 are the weakest of the group, mostly because their title doesn't go along with the haiku. #7 doesn't really talk much about a lesson, it ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: silly girl
I like the idea of this poem and how it addresses girls who overlook certain guys. At the same time though, I wish it would go more into what kind ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
Nikos sized his opponent up, his eyes searching for the slightest hint of an attack. He had been called the Shadow Man. His opponent wanted him to attack and it ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
Nikos and Mallory turned a corner to find a strange creature in front of them. "That doesn't look like a dog," Mallory said. "A Corvaz. Venomous, agile, and sharp claws. ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
"Your Majesty, I am Nikos, of the Forest Eyrie and this is my trustant, Mallory. We have been sent to deliver a prophecy to you. We were attacked shortly after ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
The amnesia was temporary and when Nikos came back, he was disoriented. "Mallory," he called. "Where have you been?" she snarled. "Something happened. Whatever it was, it didn't last too ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
High above the turrets and marketplaces of THE CITY, flew Nikos. On his back was Mallory. "Is that it?" she said. "That's THE CITY," Nikos responded. "What's it called?" "They ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Newbie :S
I prefer ducks! Just because it is fun to say "Quack." I also had this really cute duck stuffed animal which I called "Quacko." Good times... Anyhow! Welcome to YWS! ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: New kid... GET HER!
Welcome to YWS! Maybe you'd be interested in writing a storybook together? A storybook is just a bunch of authors coming together to write a story, they usually have it ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
Name: Nikomedes "Nikos" Race: Gryphon Coloring: Brown Powers: Can heal wounds, but can't cure poison, viruses, etc. Uses air magic to aid in flight.
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII
It is a time of uncertainty... blah blah blah blah blah. I don't even have to write this, you probably are able to guess just what this is and how ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: (untitled) - Prologue
There were a couple of things that didn't make sense to me, you might want to address them. 1. Rapping on the door. The scene opens with the maidservant knocking ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Uh, hi?
Welcome to YWS! My problem is that I can't write long stories. I can write simple and short stories, but I don't have the attention span to write longer stories. ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
Until next year...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Hello :)
Have you considered joining the forces of darkness and becoming one of Snoink's evil minions?
Dec 27, 2009
