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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bunch of Haikus

    I think #2 and #7 are the weakest of the group, mostly because their title doesn't go along with the haiku. #7 doesn't really talk much about a lesson, it ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: silly girl

    I like the idea of this poem and how it addresses girls who overlook certain guys. At the same time though, I wish it would go more into what kind ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    Nikos sized his opponent up, his eyes searching for the slightest hint of an attack. He had been called the Shadow Man. His opponent wanted him to attack and it ...

    Jan 4, 2010
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    Nikos and Mallory turned a corner to find a strange creature in front of them. "That doesn't look like a dog," Mallory said. "A Corvaz. Venomous, agile, and sharp claws. ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    "Your Majesty, I am Nikos, of the Forest Eyrie and this is my trustant, Mallory. We have been sent to deliver a prophecy to you. We were attacked shortly after ...

    Jan 2, 2010
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    The amnesia was temporary and when Nikos came back, he was disoriented. "Mallory," he called. "Where have you been?" she snarled. "Something happened. Whatever it was, it didn't last too ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    High above the turrets and marketplaces of THE CITY, flew Nikos. On his back was Mallory. "Is that it?" she said. "That's THE CITY," Nikos responded. "What's it called?" "They ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie :S

    I prefer ducks! Just because it is fun to say "Quack." I also had this really cute duck stuffed animal which I called "Quacko." Good times... Anyhow! Welcome to YWS! ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New kid... GET HER!

    Welcome to YWS! Maybe you'd be interested in writing a storybook together? A storybook is just a bunch of authors coming together to write a story, they usually have it ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    Name: Nikomedes "Nikos" Race: Gryphon Coloring: Brown Powers: Can heal wounds, but can't cure poison, viruses, etc. Uses air magic to aid in flight.

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Cliche Fantasy Story Part XIII

    It is a time of uncertainty... blah blah blah blah blah. I don't even have to write this, you probably are able to guess just what this is and how ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: (untitled) - Prologue

    There were a couple of things that didn't make sense to me, you might want to address them. 1. Rapping on the door. The scene opens with the maidservant knocking ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Uh, hi?

    Welcome to YWS! My problem is that I can't write long stories. I can write simple and short stories, but I don't have the attention span to write longer stories. ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook

    Until next year...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello :)

    Have you considered joining the forces of darkness and becoming one of Snoink's evil minions?

    Dec 27, 2009


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