Griffinkeeper

(OOC: Tiger, check your PM's.)

This looks like a promising first draft. You seem to have a very good handle on what the plot is going to be, who the characters are, and what is ...

It rhymes, but it is very simple; I think it can be improved further. Allow me to explain: Poetry is all about painting a picture with words. The goal is ...

I've thought about it and I think that Thomas has to be a nerd. It fits: socially awkward, intelligent, and an unlikely hero. If we make him a Doctor of ...

I'm with Margret Thatcher on this one. The same nuclear power that can power our houses is the very same that can obliterate them. We made a terrible discovery when ...

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Lumi, I will make you the following bet: 1. That Vulcan can not produce 3 chapters (2500 words each) by the end of February 2011. As a token of my ...

Lumi, I will make you the following bet: 1. That Vulcan can not produce 3 chapters (2500 words each) by the end of February 2011. As a token of my ...

RinSuru, I challenge you to do the following: 1. Write three chapters, (at least 2500 words each) that either continue a story you've started, or begin a new story. 2. ...

RinSuru, I challenge you to do the following: 1. Write three chapters, (2500 words each) that either continue a story you've started, or begin a new story. 2. Complete all ...

It had taken a little more time than she had liked, but the platoon finally began to advance. Ria charged ahead to where Fae was. "I was wondering when you ...

Just because people say I should, doesn't mean I will. It's why I only have 12 fingers. I'm willing to wager that Vulcan is too lazy to start writing a ...

Granted, but you wouldn't know where you'd end up. I wish that the next wish came true.

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