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Re: What is the nature of SPEW?
Lots of people seem to be wondering what SPEW is and what it is exactly. Specifically, what does SPEW stand for? Discuss.
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: I Was Never Meant to be
This is what is known in the business as navel gazing. This is because the poet is so completely and utterly self-absorbed that they just look at their own navel. ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: The Traitor Inside Us All
Whoa... Okay, so I guess I should describe this weird habit that readers have. Readers have been conditioned so that when they see capital letters, they read it as "shouting." ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS Adventures: The Armada of Utopia
Notes: 1. Over the past couple years I've been writing YWS Fan-fictions. Some have asked why I didn't make them storybooks, so that many people could co-author with me. It ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Give Your Immortality to Me *Revised
The air in Easton always held a grey ambience of dull haze. A constant rusty scent lingered through the city’s streets and homes. Black clouds of smoke replaced the natural ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Old Car
I rather like this poem. It captured in part the nostalgia for old cars. I liked the part where it was talking about how, even though it was old, it ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Lost In the Prayers
It was pretty, whatever it was... It's called a Railroad Novel, but it doesn't seem to have anything to do with railroads. If it had something to do with the ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: I am your bones; I am your skin
Love poems tend to need more care than regular poems. What love poems need to convey is love, which can be quite difficult. The idea is to convey that feeling ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: The last of the Krornard
This looks like it may be part of a story? I noticed a few typos. Nostrels flaring Should be "Nostrils." It seems exausted, Should be "exhausted." Tepping forwards Should be ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: New Junior Moderators
Welcome to the team!
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: New Junior Moderators?
We in the Mod Squad are confident that the new Jr. Mods will perform as well, if not better, than the ones who decided to leave.
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Kingdom
The troop proceeded West. They were mounted, it was faster that way. The cavalry forces for the Ghosts were as impressive as any part of them. Marlon liked the speed ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: How to escape with a fleeing llama -- the survival guide
Grif "Hey, I'm Fergus and I hear you guys need a tomato?" the gryphon said, revealing its wings. "I thought it was an avocado," Adeline said. "An avocado? Who likes ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: first time writing fantasy, help please?
I think the best way to introduce something that is common is to treat it that way. In this case, I would have the chi and the protagonist talking as ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Kingdom
Gor Nathal had been the Citadel of Hurden the Cruel. The dark citadel had been designed by the tyrant to be impregnable. An army of ten thousand could not hope ...
Mar 22, 2011
