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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: What is the nature of SPEW?

    Lots of people seem to be wondering what SPEW is and what it is exactly. Specifically, what does SPEW stand for? Discuss.

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Was Never Meant to be

    This is what is known in the business as navel gazing. This is because the poet is so completely and utterly self-absorbed that they just look at their own navel. ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Traitor Inside Us All

    Whoa... Okay, so I guess I should describe this weird habit that readers have. Readers have been conditioned so that when they see capital letters, they read it as "shouting." ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Archive Re: YWS Adventures: The Armada of Utopia

    Notes: 1. Over the past couple years I've been writing YWS Fan-fictions. Some have asked why I didn't make them storybooks, so that many people could co-author with me. It ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Give Your Immortality to Me *Revised

    The air in Easton always held a grey ambience of dull haze. A constant rusty scent lingered through the city’s streets and homes. Black clouds of smoke replaced the natural ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Old Car

    I rather like this poem. It captured in part the nostalgia for old cars. I liked the part where it was talking about how, even though it was old, it ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost In the Prayers

    It was pretty, whatever it was... It's called a Railroad Novel, but it doesn't seem to have anything to do with railroads. If it had something to do with the ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I am your bones; I am your skin

    Love poems tend to need more care than regular poems. What love poems need to convey is love, which can be quite difficult. The idea is to convey that feeling ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The last of the Krornard

    This looks like it may be part of a story? I noticed a few typos. Nostrels flaring Should be "Nostrils." It seems exausted, Should be "exhausted." Tepping forwards Should be ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: New Junior Moderators

    Welcome to the team!

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: New Junior Moderators?

    We in the Mod Squad are confident that the new Jr. Mods will perform as well, if not better, than the ones who decided to leave.

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Lost Kingdom

    The troop proceeded West. They were mounted, it was faster that way. The cavalry forces for the Ghosts were as impressive as any part of them. Marlon liked the speed ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: How to escape with a fleeing llama -- the survival guide

    Grif "Hey, I'm Fergus and I hear you guys need a tomato?" the gryphon said, revealing its wings. "I thought it was an avocado," Adeline said. "An avocado? Who likes ...

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: first time writing fantasy, help please?

    I think the best way to introduce something that is common is to treat it that way. In this case, I would have the chi and the protagonist talking as ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Lost Kingdom

    Gor Nathal had been the Citadel of Hurden the Cruel. The dark citadel had been designed by the tyrant to be impregnable. An army of ten thousand could not hope ...

    Mar 22, 2011


I know history. There are many names in history, but none of them are ours.
— Richard Siken