Griffinkeeper

I love your cwtches. Which last forever... I never trust words without vowels in them. But Grif, it's part of the Welsh language... Do you really trust people who can't ...

Hello, my name is Grif and I'm here to review your poem. I like the concept, but I think there are some structural problems with it. Never again will you ...

Nope, jump on in.

*Locked*

Let's tackle the limit problem. At first glance the problem looks ugly. However, with some simplifying, the problem breaks down. The first leap is to rationalize the radical in the ...

First, this is in blocks of text, which makes it really difficult to follow. The problems are bigger than that though, because the reactions of the police officer and the ...

The book of Proverbs is my favorite book from the Bible, so I am very pleased to see this poem. There are a couple things though, which would help the ...

From the work description, I think that this was more for blowing off steam than writing something creative. Which isn't bad. I mean, everyone needs to blow off some steam ...

The Striker Transport approached the town. "Resistance activity in this sector has been the most successful. Many Arbian military units were able to evade capture and destruction. They were able ...

Let's start the next mission tomorrow. I sent out some PM's reminding people about the storybook; I want them to have a chance to check their PM's.

Let's start the next mission tomorrow. I sent out some PM's reminding people about the storybook; I want them to have a chance to check their PM's.

Grif The red wire was cut and nothing happened. The warhead was quickly secured. Grif grabbed the other YWSers and activated his rocket boots, bringing them back across the bridge ...

OCC: I'll be writing the last post later today. If you want to blow any last thing up, now's your chance.

I refer you to this topic .

Hi, I'm Griffinkeeper and this is going to be my review. I noticed that you have this in parts, you might be interested in moving it in the "Fantasy Novel" ...