Griffinkeeper

It is difficult to determine if it is psychological or genetic, simply because no one is willing to go out and test it. I personally think there is a psychological ...

I'm going to spend the outage writing.

Welcome to YWS! My name is Griffinkeeper, I'm one of the cuddly moderators on YWS. Imagine gryphony feathery fluff. I'll be reviewing your work for today. I've seen some of ...

Run over by a train after being distracted by something shiny.

I'm curious to see what you do with this...

Reviewing the edit! I like that you took my advice. There are a few additional points I'd like to make. "I really don't like the idea of putting you through ...

There is a way for people to express their displeasure with things that are going on. It's called voting. So, why stand outside a Courthouse on Nov. 5, when you ...

This story is full of purple prose. Purple prose is what happens when a writer deliberately over-complicates their writing; usually because they are trying to impress the reader with their ...

The piece was well written. I didn't find the torture aspects to be very impressive. When you are interrogating someone; the last thing you want to do is to kill ...

This story... sucks. Let's start with the ABC's. Not the actual letters; ABC in this case stands for Action, Background, and Conflict. This story only has one of these. Action: ...

Hey Mimiac! I understand where you're coming from; I haven't written anything in a while either. These little pieces are great for shaking off the rust; and so let's see ...

Aboard the SPEW Gryphon III, Grif watched the monitors nervously. Normally he preferred discrete and harmless cargo when he made his trip. So when he saw a contract to move ...

Will Apollo have an updated version of phpBB?

Earl Grey The stranger hopped down from the tree, and promptly sank into six inches of mud. The ground was thoroughly soaked and had been for some time. ''Hey there, ...

Earl Earl hurried after Dorian as fast as he dared. Or as fast as the horse would let him. Up to this point, Earl and his horse had been in ...