Griffinkeeper

The tense you are using is driving me nuts. It makes the entire thing sound more dramatic than it deserves. My eyes are unable to comment, seeing as they are ...

It had some cliches in it and here is some commentary: After the fiftieth nobleman left, feeling more than a litle hurt, the king and queen approached Charlotte to ask ...

BOOHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! THE VILLAGE PAWNS YOU ALL! Bow down before Rover! 6 for 2! 6 for 2! You're free to go! Free to go! Pip pop pip pop pipppity pippitty pippity ...

I have some questions. If you could go anywhere in the world, where would it be? I give you a blank sheet of paper. Describe it to me. What is ...

Elaine repelled another wave of attacks. "Good! Take five minutes and we'll try again," Gyre said. The gryphon fell down onto her fours. "Why do we keep doing this?" Elainie ...

Comedy is hardly fiction.

The First Chapter is one of the most demanding chapters a writer writes. The reader of your book will see this chapter first, and his expectations of the book are ...

Being homeschooled I get to see things that repeatedly confuse me. I frequently wonder whether some of these actions are simply stupid (like dressing in baggy jeans which make you ...

Is it possible to attach pictures here directly? Or do we need to get them off a picture site?

Technically speaking, Gryphon=Griffin=Griffen, they are all commonly accepted spellings of the same creature. However, there are variations of gryphons that differ from the usual Lion-Eagle combinatio

Naturally this is a working project. I hope you enjoy it. Prologue New Shipyards Constructed By Jorge Steven (Associated Galatic Press) President Murphy christened the docks of the new Shipyards ...

Indeed. Letting completely random writers who know little or nothing about your story probably isn't the best way to decide the matter. Don't get me wrong, if you come to ...

I agree with Reuchieru, kill the prologue. Besides, it gives away the ending, which is bad for prologues. A prologue gives the reader an idea of what happened before hand. ...

Red Parakeets... I'm pretty sure I saw that name in TYWC, but it must have been ages ago. Glad to see you're back into writing though. I was on TYWC ...

A barrel roll is real simple. Imagine a barrel. Say you paint a white stripe along the side of this barrel. Now roll the barrel until that white strip comes ...