Griffinkeeper

Yes, it is him, the man with the silver eyes. A few sentence later: His shaggy mane of hair was a sickening brown. We have a tense problem here. Decide ...

I wasn't staring was I?

I'm a Roman Catholic, life is too logical to be created by billions of coincidences. Although I seem to have my own bias as to how things occurred in the ...

Here is a rule for you guys to think about. In general: A prologue must not tell anything about the main character, a lot about the settings (although not how ...

What sort of columns are available?

"I see you've been getting your character names from anime again." "It is really mean of you to give people the ability to speak, and yet give them nothing worth ...

Never Let You Go by Third Eye Blind

Indeed, we came from god. Adam certainly didn't create himself. Nor did we come from apes. Apes=Apes. Now, as for evolution, there is no reason to think that god didn't ...

It would so rock to write a parallel story with a gryphon viewpoint in your world. It is really odd, you already have an author ready to write fan fiction ...

I just like gryphons, they represent my alma better. Goths are okay, I guess, but I think they need to lighten up. Come to think of it, so should poets, ...

Hysteria... it sounds familiar, but I can place where I saw it. Anyway, a fellow TYWCer here. You'll love it here.

I had an idea similar to your "All the magic is sent to another world" thing. Except I was focusing on the Gryphons. You should focus more on description. It ...

“Tobitha, would you mind staying after class for a moment?” said Mr. Winslow quietly as she walked by his desk. Good hook! It establishes a character, a setting, and a ...

I wrote an entry in my blog regarding screen names, you might want to check it out. SNOINK IS MY TWIN YOU CAN'T HAVE HER!! BOOWHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Snoink, those were very serious errors, which I will remedy quickly. Darn, now I actually have to be creative with my sarcasm.