Griffinkeeper

I agree with Crysi, you aren't the worst artist around... I AM!

drat

Very well thought out and executed. If you submitted this as a paper, then you should get full credit. I don't understand why some people dislike Mormons, you guys are ...

Gatt

Not according to NASA. Only about every 300,000 years, although ours is 400,000 years overdue.

The second draft has removed many of the kinks of the first one. Characters have been removed, along with their personal traits (presumably shifted to Chapter One). Some minor changes: ...

Religion is a matter of faith. If you believe in it, you believe in it. I'm done here for now.

The Gaian planets are not living, Mars is geologically dead. While Earth is alive in the geologic sense, it is still a big rock. There is nothing mysterious about it's ...

snot

First, don't introduce any of the characters involved. That is the job of Chapter One. You should focus exclusively on the war, how it started, and where the character is ...

The UK (not england, fool) is pretty powerful in the world, actually. Or does the 5th biggest economy not count for anything? One of the biggest countries in the EU? ...

Your story is very confused. It sounds like you started wanting to write from the perspective of the old hunter, yet you switched the protagonist halfway through. You can't be ...

The story with the magnetic field swap? That won't occur in our lifetimes. It is thought that as the magnetic field gets weaker, you will see Aurora Borealis further south, ...

Are you suggesting we ban jokes that offend others, Galatea? Racist and sexist jokes make fun of people using stereotypes which can be percieved as absurd, absurdities like how Mexicans ...

For humor, there is only two things that exist: Funny and Not Funny. Racist Jokes that are percieved as funny to the people that hear it, are not harmful. If ...