Griffinkeeper

But then in Britain it's illegal for citizens to have guns and we don't have a tyrannical goverment. Yet. England makes criminals out of those who only wish to defend ...

Where should I begin? First I'll start with QiGuaiGongFu. People arent good or evil, they just do what they feel is right. Good and evil is nothing more than a ...

Oh come on now. Plz read and reply. First off, don't use chatspeak. This is a forum, not an instant messager. It being a forum, it may be several hours ...

I was also extremely confused. First of all, I have no idea how to treat this. It could either be a seperate story or a prologue. This is a minor ...

If writing a bad prologue was a disease, I'd say that this forum was in the midst of an epidemic. Fortunately for everyone, I have the cure, which is this ...

All righty, time for the extraordinary critique. THE TALE OF THE DRAGON JEWELS THE LEGEND OF THE DRAGON JEWELS First off, all caps are bad. Use different sizes, bold it, ...

The reason we were put on this planet by God was so that we may do his will. He didn't give us nuclear weapons. Suffice it to say it wasn't ...

Nice to see a new member. Here's a hello from across the pond.

er... it's a little short?

This one is a little difficult to review, so I'll do my best. I'll just comment on what I see. Here is a story I'm working on. Any comments would ...

If you could do a picture of a black gryphon, with an old beaten leather pack, and perhaps a Robin Hood hat, I would be eternally grateful. There is a ...

We know of some divine force and there is a way to focus on that aspect. It comes from creation itself. We know, for instance, the conservation of energy law. ...

other universes, are, i forgot to mention, theoretical. our universe is expanding at the speed of light - you all know this. but expaning implies into SOMETHING, whether that something ...

Dark matter is hardly an all-arching term. The amount of observed matter in the universe only accounts for 1% of the entire forces necessary to explain the speed of the ...

First, Blacksmiths don't sell horses. They are metal workers. The only association with horses is that the put horse shoes on them. Nothing more. You need to find out what ...