Griffinkeeper

I'm sure that every homeschooled kid knows drunks and stoners. The way you put it makes it sound like our immediate circle is filled with drunks and stoners, you should ...

Homeschoolers (assuming no parental suppression) can still be socialized via organizations like the Boy Scouts or homeschool groups. With the internet it is nearly impossible for people to not run ...

Who find fox too liberal? satan? Fox news has a history of firing its reportors if they publish something that makes the republican party look bad. Quote your source.

Ok, number 1: Fox news doesn't count. Fox news is the most politcally biased network on the planet. Everybody knows that. Rupert Murdock is farther right wing than any republican ...

Hello as you can see i'm new here and i'm new to writing I normally write and draw comic books and have decided to take on writing books as well. ...

Just for the record: If I don't mention something it means A) Someone already covered it or B)I missed it or C) It is good.

Ah a newbie. Welcome, there is a few things I see in this story that concern me. The first is the number of weapons. They have a Katana, Whip, and ...

Are all Canadians this dense?

This is now known that the people who came to help in battle were not farmers an men, but the Knight templars, so they changed the tide for the battle ...

I really hate these lines: He carried no weapons, except for a small dagger attached to his belt. If It weren't for the light of the full moon sitting among ...

After the pixies came I started to lose interest. I mean, what is the point of the story if the protagonist gets everything she wants handed to her on a ...

I like the pompous style of your bureaucrat, it was kind of fun to read. Hmm. This passes my prologue axe because it is a letter. Which is kind of ...

I don't know much about them but until yeserday i alway assumed they were devow Christians but now because of one movie my opinion more fluid. So were the Knight ...

I KNOW SOMETHING ABOUT KNIGHTS TEMPLAR. THEY WERE THE ONES BURNED BY A POPE BECAUSE OF THEY HOLD SOMETHING SO IMPORTANT THAT WOULD CRIPPLE THE CATHOLIC CHURCH. AND I THINK ...

You are great, some of your stories need work. Our criticism is directed at your stories, not you.