Griffinkeeper

Well done. I do believe that is what people call a compliment, you are quite welcome. Now, when will I decide to post something? More importantly, how will it be ...

I don't think this is a proper prologue. Prologues are normally done in third person and in past tense. This one made a big no no by switching between past ...

This is simply too blocky as far as text is concerned. It needs too have two lines between each paragraph before I can read it. This is an example: Blah. ...

Well done. I wish there was a better way of indicating unicorn speak, like italics or brackets or something. It just looks weird without the quotation marks. This makes it ...

I don't thing the weapons are really appropriate either. Werewolves can only be killed by shooting them through the heart with a silver bullet. A katana or a whip are ...

Thanks for the vote of confidence. Also, sure doesn't have an h in it. Also, it seems like you have a run-on sentence, split it up. Just cause you're not ...

I think it is very fitting. Then again, I know Penelope...

Welcome, I hope to be reading more of your stories soon.

As you say, but spanking is of less severity than being beaten. Whereas hitting is commonly used as a term to describe being punched, especially in relation to a domestic ...

Welcome. Here is my review. "It is almost time for...............................The end. The end of the world............The end of the universe!!!!!!!" Said a loud booming voice that bursted through

The problem with spanking is that they do not work on older children, who may or may not be conditioned to a spanking. In this case, other methods of punishment ...

Why should the "bad people" live longer?? Bad people need all the opportunity they can get when it comes to renouncing the evil they have done. Other than that... Personally, ...

I think that parents have the right to discipline their child in any way, so long as it doesn't take the form of child abuse. Parents must be allowed to ...

I got to admit, it seemed like the story didn't quite make it off the ground. It seemed like I would start reading one way to introduce the story, then ...

I don't thing the weapons are really appropriate either. Werewolves can only be killed by shooting them through the heart with a silver bullet. A katana or a whip are ...