Griffinkeeper

I have to agree, the community feel is working well. I have concerns, which will be voiced in the dislikes. I do like how the admins are very active though.

#5 - Yes they do. Never touch girls. They're evil. Aren't cooties fictional? Girls are inherently evil. Sorry, manipulating minds requires it.

Your problem isn't detail, you accomplished that well. The problem is over detailing. Every thing is detailed intricately, but if you detail everything like that, it makes it difficult for ...

Don't let the massive list of rules throw you off, it is just the structure.

Blood-soaked and almost lifeless, the girl slowly dragged her unwilling body out of the debris. Breathing heavily, she forced her body up, her legs and arms dangling pathetically - giving ...

Sure, give me a couple of hours.

I think a forum to advertise work would be a good way for people to get attention for their story. I was thinking about doing just that for a storybook ...

Most detailed critiques require a lot of time on the part of reviewers. Not many reviewers can do that many critiques in that detail. Some of them look at things ...

It's the Warleader jennafina, check the signature. It is a name for an assault mech I renovated for an old game. 9/10 for clear drawing.

What do you mean "we"?

"Wow, your story seemed to have a lot of stuff compressed into a tiny amount of space, just like the other things in my trash compactor." "Make sure to use ...

There are actually two versions of the creation story in the bible. One in which Adam and Eve are created as equals, one in which Eve is taken from Adam's ...

I think I'll just use it as a reference for the story.

I like the way the eyes and the eyebrows were detailed. I thought the nose seemed a little small and the fingers seemed to be coming from everywhere, as if ...

How does it effect the world?