Griffinkeeper

If you, LoyalHeart, allow your character to kill Nike's character, then you will have committed the single most heinous action a storybook author can commit: murdering another authors active character

Some quick notes! 1. Focus on character development, not fight scenes. A lot of the characters seem rather shallow and that makes them dull to work with. 2. Prison builds ...

The inner sanctum of YWS's most secretive group was unlike any other. For one, the floors were like trampolines. Grif bounced around a bit before continuing on. He was looking ...

Dictionaries are your friend. palace |ˈpalis| noun the official residence of a sovereign, archbishop, bishop, or other exalted person : the royal palace. • informal a large, splendid house. ORIGIN ...

Loyal, could you please edit out the f-bomb? Kids are on this site.

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The dragon landed and Grif saw what appeared to be a slide of light leading down through a hole in the ground. Grif didn't hesitate, but slid down it. "WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" ...

If everyone WAITED, I would have shown Bianca chating with Rydia and then call a cease fire and disengage, but Vampiresenshi decided to jump the gun and continue the fight. ...

Hey folks! By the way, I am having way too much fun. Did I mention that Grif was riding a DRAGON? That kind of insanity is why I love YWS ...

This... Griffinkeeper thought, is pretty amazing. So what if a Dragon had grabbed him from the ground and was in the process of carrying him off to his lair? It ...

If a murderer is let free, then the murderer can kill again. If another man is arrested instead of the murderer, then the innocent man is punished, while the murderer ...

Just a quick note about the YWS Fleet... The YWS Fleet is a neutral third party that guards YWS members. Planet Apollo is the current home of YWS. The previous ...

Grif stood on Planet Apollo, not quite able to believe his eyes. Only months ago, YWS had been scattered, the fleet had been destroyed, along with their only base of ...

Dug up this Old Thread . It might be relevant.

I think the only option is to change your writing fuel source. When you grew up, you used your frustrations for escapism. Now that you're older, you will have to ...