Griffinkeeper

I think this storybook would make more sense if the characters were shape-shifters. It would explain why they have the attributes of their normal form while they are in the ...

Marlon Grey ~ Human I couldn't stand The Official. The Official had no name and at first glance no gender. It was the perfect soulless bureaucrat; an automaton of protocol. ...

Swearing really isn't needed. Swearing is only really good for giving a sentence shock value, but that shock value is subject to the law of diminishing returns. And why bother ...

Technically speaking, KeiPie is an it.

A few notes before I go to bed. Marlon is suspicious because the King doesn't appear to be aggressively pursuing the kidnappers. If he is right, then that could allow ...

Marlon Grey I cleaned my hands at the washroom and considered the window. It was intentionally small, to prevent people from climbing in; although I was more interested in leaving. ...

Using moderator magic, I've merged the old storybook topic with the DT, so all the information is in one place, instead of floating around in the Storybook forum.

@WritersDream: I think we should let the characters play out before we figure out whether or not they should get together. They already share a lot of things in common; ...

Initially, I thought the POV restriction was a bit too much. Then I thought, "Challenge Accepted!"

Hating humans means that he doesn't like any aspect of humans, either its sins or virtues. If he only has a problem with it's sins, including greed, pride, and deception, ...

Something to consider. It often happens in storybooks that an author says "Hey, save a spot for me" and is never heard from again. So, it may not be a ...

What effect, if any, will magic have on the world?

Name: Marlon Grey Age: 25 Gender: Male Elf, human, dwarf or sprite (if sprite please specify which one): Human Appearance (a picture is welcome but also describe in words): Marlon's ...

There's no way to prove or disprove that I see green as pink, but the likelihood of that is extremely small. Just because something can't be definitely proven or disproven ...

Grif looked at the large numbers of pirates. The SPEW Gryphon could take them, but the other ships in the YWS Fleet didn't have that kind of ability. "We're get ...