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  • Other Poetry Re: Dental Rehab

    I don't get it. Too surrealistic.

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: How to make reviewers hate you...

    8. Switch gender roles with all of your characters. Everything feminine should become masculine and vice versa. Bob is a good name for a lady anyway. 9. Japanese names are ...

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Archive Re: In Which A Stupid Dragon Comes Into Town...

    ~Saden Al'ar~ I arrived at the castle 3 hours later. I wasn't up to flying after using all my energy to heal the princess. So, I walked slowly through the ...

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 2 of Beggining of a Novel

    He jumped off Clerriek, and landed sending pain shooting up his leg. He looked around, and saw the woman. No commas before "and", if there are only two things being ...

    Dec 12, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Piecing it Together

    First off, the guy isn't convincing. Most guys aren't self concious, they tend to be watching other things. He wouldn't notice his sweat, unless it was an obstacle to something, ...

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Member of the Week 12/12 to 12/19

    Zelithon is the member of week! She has been highly active on the site, in both sections. It is great to see such enthusiastic writers on the site. Keep up ...

    Dec 12, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Fuel Deport Blast

    It just got updated on my news source, which is surprising. It just got reported 15 minutes ago. I sure hope it wasn't a terrorist attack, since everyone in England ...

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Whats the best alien movie ever made?(In your opinion)

    Rent Beauty and the beast Phantom of the opera I don't seem to remember Aliens in that movie. Although some of the actors can be mistaken for aliens.

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Now's the time to say it.

    YES! Learn from Snoink, she is the master!

    Dec 11, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Suicidal Mind

    I stood standing by the window. Rain was pouring out side. It fit my mood perfectly. It had been another day. I had gone o school. My face had been ...

    Dec 11, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Labels I

    Whatever the content of this is, the structure of it is all askew. This makes it harder to follow. Is this a poem?

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Archive Re: In Which A Stupid Dragon Comes Into Town...

    (I think everyone is just waiting for me, or Snoink. I'll get a post up when I wake up tomorrow.)

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Archive Re: YWS-2

    I took one of Qi's futuristic hats. I placed on my head and looked in the mirror, I looked snazzy. "Hello, thank you for purchasing the Hat-O-Matic 4000," the hat ...

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Read This! It's Great!

    If you are going to post a poem, use the name of the poem in the title, not "READn This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That just gets me annoyed.

    Dec 11, 2005
  • Other Re: September 11

    I remember that day pretty well. Time does a lot to heal it, but it is still there. It was a normal morning for me. My goal was to get ...

    Dec 10, 2005


We always talk about the "doers" and "dreamers" but I'd like to give a big shoutout to the "tryers".
— Hannah Hart