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Re: Dental Rehab
I don't get it. Too surrealistic.
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: How to make reviewers hate you...
8. Switch gender roles with all of your characters. Everything feminine should become masculine and vice versa. Bob is a good name for a lady anyway. 9. Japanese names are ...
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: In Which A Stupid Dragon Comes Into Town...
~Saden Al'ar~ I arrived at the castle 3 hours later. I wasn't up to flying after using all my energy to heal the princess. So, I walked slowly through the ...
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Beggining of a Novel
He jumped off Clerriek, and landed sending pain shooting up his leg. He looked around, and saw the woman. No commas before "and", if there are only two things being ...
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Re: Piecing it Together
First off, the guy isn't convincing. Most guys aren't self concious, they tend to be watching other things. He wouldn't notice his sweat, unless it was an obstacle to something, ...
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: Member of the Week 12/12 to 12/19
Zelithon is the member of week! She has been highly active on the site, in both sections. It is great to see such enthusiastic writers on the site. Keep up ...
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: Fuel Deport Blast
It just got updated on my news source, which is surprising. It just got reported 15 minutes ago. I sure hope it wasn't a terrorist attack, since everyone in England ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Whats the best alien movie ever made?(In your opinion)
Rent Beauty and the beast Phantom of the opera I don't seem to remember Aliens in that movie. Although some of the actors can be mistaken for aliens.
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Now's the time to say it.
YES! Learn from Snoink, she is the master!
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Suicidal Mind
I stood standing by the window. Rain was pouring out side. It fit my mood perfectly. It had been another day. I had gone o school. My face had been ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Labels I
Whatever the content of this is, the structure of it is all askew. This makes it harder to follow. Is this a poem?
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: In Which A Stupid Dragon Comes Into Town...
(I think everyone is just waiting for me, or Snoink. I'll get a post up when I wake up tomorrow.)
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: YWS-2
I took one of Qi's futuristic hats. I placed on my head and looked in the mirror, I looked snazzy. "Hello, thank you for purchasing the Hat-O-Matic 4000," the hat ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Read This! It's Great!
If you are going to post a poem, use the name of the poem in the title, not "READn This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That just gets me annoyed.
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: September 11
I remember that day pretty well. Time does a lot to heal it, but it is still there. It was a normal morning for me. My goal was to get ...
Dec 10, 2005
