Griffinkeeper

You guys/gals should really get your minds out of the gutter. Seriously.

"How long are we going to let Qi think he has us under mind control?" I asked Firestarter. "Probably until we get bored," he responded. The dancing continued. I wanted ...

Arvy, calm down. Anyway, I'm always happy to see new members.

Snoink began to machine gun the bluebirds, which was difficult considering she didn't have opposible thumbs. At that moment, the machine gun went out of control, destroying hats and sending ...

The debate section is too uptight here anyway. Moderators will take care of double posts, although you can delete them. Most of the time they are accidents, so there is ...

Nice description of a hippie on the way down. Really made him into an old man.

He was the leader of SPEW for awhile, but there was a revolution against him when he started editing the members post and deleting threads when they didn't agree with ...

Materialistic isn't accurate because we are materialistic. However, we tend to fall more on the functional side of materialism, where females tend to fall more towards the fashionable side. When ...

First reaction: Probably not good. At first I'd be freaking out. Then I'd be worried that I was hallucinating. Finally I'd think it was some sort of punishment by God ...

Just bragging rights at the moment. Although that might change in the future.

Uh, you're welcome?

The drawings are very nice. I like the bird in particular, but I think it's flight feathers could be extender a little more.

The lighting doesn't make any sense, and the ground looks like it is spongy.

Nice lyrical quality, but it seems like you over-played the dramatic aspects. A little suspense would be better, instead of pure angst.

Sammy doesn't seem like it belongs in 1810 Portsmouth. Also, the ing-verbs that start the sentences in the first paragraph should be used sparingly, after a while it gets annoying.