Griffinkeeper

Well, this is the first religious poem I've seen. I only wish I could critique poetry. How do people critique poetry anyways?

*Is horrified that none of those cute animals ended up as road kill.*

YAY!! He's back from the dead!

Post a seperate welcome thread!! Lots of people will see it and introduce themselves to you! Come on, don't be shy!

Oh god. The moment I see bad spelling, I just run away. I mean, it is like saying "here is this piece that I didn't care enough to spell check, ...

This is exactly what happens in storybooks, where there is no set "end" but a chain of ideas.

Most bullets can kill people (aside from .22s, but thats another story) but the higher the caliber, the easier it is, thus the better the stopping power. Wrong. All bullets ...

First off, we need to work on the actual gun. There is no such thing as a single shot revolver. By definition, a revolver is a weapon that automatically "revolves" ...

This seems more like a research piece. *Moved*

I like this. Don’t believe it. It is attention grabbing. While Sam is right that the other way is more effective, you have the concept of a hook down. Next ...

I'm going to unlock this. If anyone uses curse words or flames, they will be in trouble. *Unlocked*

I'm tired. However, I do have a few hints. Read the FAQ's and the rules. A lot of people come here, post all their work, and then are never heard ...

After a colossal bribe of gold and roast able animals, the orks returned to their encampment and feasted. Led by Gerhart the proud yet short dwarfs had to do this ...

Yay! Old pacman forever!

Care to explain this in more detail Sponson?