Griffinkeeper

I haven't read it, though I hear it is a classic. Nice to see that you are reading them though. Most of the stuff I've been reading is history. Then ...

Or saved to beat others on the insanely difficult points scale.

There really is a huge amount of firearms out there. It just depends what you're using it for.

The gas used, according to the commadant of Auschwitz, was Zyklon B, it is a hydrocynic acid. I found this description of the actual gassing: "The door would now be ...

There are definite grammar problems though, snoink, you should fix that up. Grammar problems? Nah... this is perfect. :P Blasphemy! *Grabs torches*

Second that, the Welcome thread is built for new writers such as yourself. As for this, it seems to lack substance. It is two sentences long. It seems like it ...

Not bad, spelling looks okay. You use "And" to start a sentence, which isn't good since the word "And" is a conjunction. Other than that, this looks good!

Would you mind informing us of your artistic intent in this case? It seems very... suggestive. It seems okay in the structural and spelling aspects, but I'm seriously freaked out. ...

I seem to remember this being written as an example of what NOT to do. If this were real life, I'd be tearing my hair out and using it to ...

*Frowns* Dragons=Fantasy Fiction Really... *Moved*

AGH! CHATSPEAK!!

Can someone please tell me what the Redwall series is about? Karma, what happened to your typing? Could you edit your post please?

Almost forgot. Orks? This is a fantasy fiction. *Moved.*

If this were dialogue, I'd ignore all the spelling errors. There are no quotation marks though. Thus, you aren't allowed to do this. Let's just assume that there are quotation ...

This is a poem/prose type structure. Except the two should never mix. This story looks unorganized, put it in one structure or the other. When you do, post it in ...